2024年1月13日雅思大作文示范写作 | 规划未来 or 进入此刻

　　2024年1月13日雅思大作文题目

　　Some people think it is a waste of time for individuals to plan the future and it is more important to focus on present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　有些人认为对个人来说，计划未来是浪费时间，关注现在更重要。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

　　范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　Inarguably, everyone's path to life's revelation is different; some are accustomed to pondering over the unknown future for more readiness , while other are used to concentrating on being for more mindfulness. Both approaches will be explored in this essay.

　　解析

　　毋庸置疑，每个人通往生命启示的道路都是不同的;有些人习惯于思考未知的未来，以获得更多的准备，而另一些人则习惯于专注于当下，以获得更多的正念。本文将探讨这两种方法。

　　revelation 启示n.

　　ponder over 思考 v.

　　unknown future 未知的未来

　　readiness 准备n.

　　being 当下n.

　　mindfulness 正念n.

　　Body 1

　　Seeing whether there would be a smooth road ahead allows one to reflect on one’s past, thus changing for the better. Budgeting for a lavish vacation amid an unstable employment, for example, could require one to examine previous binge shopping spree — which should be refrained from. Comparably, preparing for declining physical fitness in retirement may lead someone to change their irregular lifestyle that they have lived since middle age. An absence of this prophecy is a calamity. Inadequate long-term planning can have particularly severe consequences for immature youngsters who, as a result, fail to develop visions and missions that are essential during difficult times. This also holds true for adults, ripping much greater void separating their ambition from their status quo.

　　解析

　　看到前方是否会有一条平坦的道路，可以让你反思自己的过去，从而变得更好。例如，在工作不稳定的情况下，为奢侈的假期做预算，可能需要一个人反思以前的疯狂购物——这是应该避免的。相比之下，为退休后身体素质下降做准备，可能会让人改变中年以来不稳定的生活方式。没有这个预言就是一场灾难。不充分的长期规划会对缺乏成熟的青少年造成特别严重的后果，他们无法制定在困难时期至关重要的目标和使命。这也适用于成年人，使其他们的抱负与现状之间存在着更大的鸿沟。

　　a smooth road ahead前方平坦的道路

　　reflect on 反思

　　budgeting 为某事做预算

　　binge shopping spree 购物狂欢

　　refrained 克制

　　declining physical fitness 日渐下行的体质

　　irregular lifestyle 不规律的生活方式

　　prophecy 预言 n.

　　calamity 灾难 n.

　　severe consequences 严重后果

　　visions and missions 愿景与使命

　　rip greater void 撕裂虚空/加大差距

　　status quo 现状

　　Body 2

　　On the other hand, the benefits of making life arrangements beforehand are a bit less solid for certain groups. Difficulties in revealing one’s inner voice mean that contemplating one’s future may end up being simply swayed by others’ opinions or on a whim; going with the flow could allow for more adaptability, which is a key ingredient of personal flourishing. The previous Covid-19 pandemic slashed thousands of jobs in either tourism or international trade, while some newly furloughed successfully rebounded from the rock bottom, rebooting their new career by channeling their desire to have a control over life. Being present-focused also holds sway for people without much confidence. Without looking ahead in a gloomy perspective, they could execute daily plans with more effectiveness, rather than buying into common misleading belief that best future exclusively comes from planning.

　　解析

　　另一方面，对某些群体来说，提前做好生活安排的好处就不那么明显了。难以表达自己内心的声音意味着，对未来的思考可能最终只是被别人的意见或一时兴起所左右;聚焦此刻可以让你有更多的适应性，这是个人繁荣的一个重要组成部分。之前的Covid-19疫情削减了旅游业或国际贸易领域的数千个工作岗位，而一些被裁员的人成功地从谷底反弹，通过引导他们控制生活的愿望重新开始了新的职业生涯。关注当下对缺乏自信的人也有影响。如果没有悲观的展望，他们可以更有效地执行日常最普通也是最重要的活动，而不是相信最好的未来只来自计划。

　　Beforehand 提前

　　solid 结实的/可靠的

　　revealing one’s inner voice表达自己内心的声音

　　contemplating 思考v.

　　swayed 被影响adj.

　　on a whim 一时兴起

　　going with the flow 聚焦此刻

　　adaptability 适应能力

　　flourishing 繁荣

　　slashed 削减

　　furloughed 休假的/被裁员的

　　rebounded from the rock bottom从谷底反弹

　　rebooting 重启

　　holds sway 扮演重要角色

　　looking ahead 提前预判

　　execute daily plans 执行日常计划

　　buying into 相信

　　misleading belief 有误导性的思想

　　exclusively 仅仅地

　　Conclusion

　　To conclude, I believe that clinging to upcoming life plans is not a universal antidote to mounting uncertainties. While this futuristic mindset can certainly be beneficial to some groups, living for the moment or entering the moment carries more significance for others. Therefore, it should be up to individuals to decide which pathway ensures more new possibilities.

　　解析

　　总之，我认为坚持即将到来的生活计划并不是解决不断增加的不确定性的万能解药。虽然这种未来主义的心态当然对某些群体有益，但对另一些群体来说，活在当下或进入当下更有意义。因此，应该由个人来决定哪条道路能确保更多新的可能性。

　　clinging to 坚持

　　antidote 解药

　　mounting 越来越多的

　　uncertainties 不确定性 n.

　　futuristic mindset 未来主义的思维模式

　　entering the moment 进入当下