雅思写作语料之犯罪类

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divergent opinions regarding不同的观点

how to handle lawbreakers如何处理违法者

There are divergent opinions regarding how to handle lawbreakers.

better alternatives更好的选择

While some argue that prison is the only solution, others believe that there are better alternatives.

provide an opinion on the matter对这件事发表意见This essay will discuss both views and provide an opinion on the matter.

be punished for their wrongdoings为他们的错误行为受到惩罚On the one hand, those who support prison as the only solution argue that criminals should be punished for their wrongdoings.

deter them from committing crimes阻止他们犯罪They believe that prison is the most effective way to deter them from committing crimes in the future.

being in prison坐牢

a just punishment for the harm they have caused to society对他们对社会造成的危害的公正惩罚Additionally, they argue that being in prison is a just punishment for the harm they have caused to society.

keep these individuals away from the public让这些人远离公众prevent them from committing further crimes阻止他们进一步犯罪They also argue that it is necessary to keep these individuals away from the public to prevent them from committing further crimes.

should not be the only solution不应该是唯一的解决方案On the other hand, those who believe that there are better alternatives argue that prison should not be the only solution.

does not necessarily deter crime不一定能阻止犯罪may make the problem worse会使问题变得更糟They argue that prison does not necessarily deter crime and that it may make the problem worse.

better ways to use these resources更好地利用这些资源Furthermore, they argue that prison is expensive and that there are better ways to use these resources.

commit minor offenses犯轻罪

should be given community service应该给予社区服务benefit the local community造福当地社区

Instead, they suggest that those who commit minor offenses should be given community service, which will benefit the local community.

offenders罪犯

help in cleaning the streets or planting trees in public parks帮助打扫街道或在公园植树For instance, offenders could help in cleaning the streets or planting trees in public parks.

reduce the burden on the prison system减轻监狱系统的负担allow the offenders to make amends for their mistakes允许冒犯者弥补他们的错误This would not only reduce the burden on the prison system but also allow the offenders to make amends for their mistakes.

better alternatives to prison比监狱更好的选择In my opinion, I agree with the view that there are better alternatives to prison.

be effective in deterring some individuals from committing crimes有效地阻止某些人犯罪does little to address the root causes of criminal behavior对于根治犯罪行为的只能起到一点点作用While prison may be effective in deterring some individuals from committing crimes, it does little to address the root causes of criminal behavior.

focus on rehabilitation注重改造

address the underlying issues that lead to criminal behavior解决导致犯罪行为的潜在问题Community service and other programs that focus on rehabilitation are better alternatives because they address the underlying issues that lead to criminal behavior.

drug and alcohol addiction药物或酒精成瘾

mental health issues心理健康问题

poverty 贫穷

factors in criminal behavior犯罪行为的因素For example, drug and alcohol addiction, mental health issues, and poverty are often factors in criminal behavior.

provide treatment and support for these issues为这些问题提供治疗和支持be more effective in reducing crime rates更有效地降低犯罪率Therefore, providing treatment and support for these issues would be more effective in reducing crime rates.

the only solution for lawbreakers对付违法者的唯一办法better alternatives更好的选择

In conclusion, while some people believe that prison is the only solution for lawbreakers, others argue that there are better alternatives.

community service and other programs that focus on rehabilitation社区服务和其他以改造为重点的项目a better solution更好的解决方法

address the root causes of criminal behavior解决犯罪行为的根本原因In my view, community service and other programs that focus on rehabilitation are a better solution because they address the root causes of criminal behavior.