雅思写作分享| 犯罪是天生还是后天导致的？

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雅思大作文历年真题：Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

two common perspectives regarding the causes of crime关于犯罪原因的两种常见观点

There are two common perspectives regarding the causes of crime.

attribute most crime to environmental factors把大多数犯罪归因于环境因素

Some people attribute most crime to environmental factors like poverty, unemployment, and other social problems.

criminal behavior犯罪行为

the result of inherent character flaws 固有性格缺陷的结果

But others believe that criminal behavior is the result of inherent character flaws and that some individuals are "bad by nature."

explore both views and provide my opinion探讨两种观点并提供我的观点

In this essay, I will explore both views and provide my opinion.

is a result of circumstances是环境的结果

live in poverty生活贫困

have limited resources and opportunities to make a living legally合法谋生的资源和机会有限

On the one hand, those who hold the view that crime is a result of circumstances argue that people who live in poverty have limited resources and opportunities to make a living legally.

low-income individuals 低收入个体

have little choice别无选择

turn to crime to provide for their families为了养家糊口而犯罪

For instance, low-income individuals may have little choice but to turn to crime to provide for their families.

live in neighborhoods with high crime rates住在犯罪率高的社区

be more likely to engage in criminal behavior themselves更有可能参与犯罪行为

Additionally, people who live in neighborhoods with high crime rates may be more likely to engage in criminal behavior themselves.

are more likely to be exposed to it 更有可能接触到它

view it as a normal or necessary way of life把它看作是一种正常的或必要的生活方式

This is because they are more likely to be exposed to it and may view it as a normal or necessary way of life.

are influenced by the circumstances they find themselves in会受到他们所处环境的影响

In other words, people's actions are influenced by the circumstances they find themselves in.

argue that criminal behavior is innate认为犯罪行为是天生的

On the other hand, there are those who argue that criminal behavior is innate and that some people are just "bad seeds."

are born with a predisposition towards aggressive and violent behavior天生就有攻击性和暴力行为的倾向

According to this viewpoint, some individuals are born with a predisposition towards aggressive and violent behavior.

due to factors such as genetics or brain abnormalities由于遗传或大脑异常等因素

This may be due to factors such as genetics or brain abnormalities.

engage in criminal behavior 从事犯罪行为

lack empathy and show little concern for the welfare of others缺乏同理心，不关心他人的福祉

Moreover, it has been suggested that some people who engage in criminal behavior lack empathy and show little concern for the welfare of others.

justify their crimes to themselves为自己的罪行辩护

feel little remorse for their actions对自己的行为不感到自责

This lack of empathy allows them to justify their crimes to themselves and to feel little remorse for their actions.

have some validity有一定的有效性

In my opinion, both perspectives have some validity.

social problems like poverty and lack of education贫困和缺乏教育等社会问题

contribute to criminal behavior助长犯罪行为

It is clear that social problems like poverty and lack of education can contribute to criminal behavior.

are more prone to criminal behavior than others比其他人更容易有犯罪行为

due to inherent personality traits and neurological factors由于固有的人格特征和神经因素

However, I also believe that there are certain individuals who are more prone to criminal behavior than others due to inherent personality traits and neurological factors.

is not a black and white issue不是非黑即白的问题

contribute to criminal behavior助长犯罪行为

It is not a black and white issue, and there are likely many factors that contribute to criminal behavior.

are complex and multifaceted是复杂和多面的

In conclusion, the causes of crime are complex and multifaceted.

play a role in their decision to engage in criminal behavior在他们决定从事犯罪行为的过程中发挥作用

are more prone to criminal behavior than others比其他人更容易有犯罪行为

While the circumstances surrounding an individual can play a role in their decision to engage in criminal behavior, it is also true that there are some individuals who are more prone to criminal behavior than others.

prevent crime预防犯罪

address both environmental and personal factors解决环境和个人因素

Ultimately, any effort to prevent crime must address both environmental and personal factors.