6月3日雅思大作文示范写作 | 老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法

来源：新航道深圳学校浏览：发布日期：2023-06-05 17:48:56

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2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目

Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?(2023/06/03)

范文及解析

Introduction

Taking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.

解析

本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；

play midwife to v.促成;帮助；

ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；

viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；

avert v.防止，避免；

bleak adj.不乐观的；

Body 1

Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition,under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored recreational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.

解析

Causes：

(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；

(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；

(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；

feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；

be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；

cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；

minister to v.照顾；援助；

be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；

intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；

grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；

be indisposed to v.不愿意；

tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；

amenity n.便利设施；

vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；

dampen v.减弱，抑制；

Body 2

In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path ,which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.

解析

Solutions：

(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；

(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；

(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；

prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；

earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；

proffer v.递上；提供，提出；

disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；

tangible adj.明确的，真实的；

boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；

boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；

Conclusion

In conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.

解析

总结前文信息；重申观点。