2023年5月27日雅思大作文示范写作 | 社会贡献与收入高低

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2023年5月27日雅思大作文题目

Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一些人说专业工作者，如医生、护士和教师，他们对社会的贡献更大，应该比那些在体育和娱乐领域的人得到更多的报酬。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

范文及解析

Introduction

It is true that stipend of skilled workers, ranging from practitioners and nurses to teachers and engineers, is not on par with that of first-league celebrities in either sports or entertainment sector. Whereas there is still no consensus over justification for this stark contrast.

解析

的确，从医生、护士到教师和工程师，技术工人的津贴与体育或娱乐界的一线明星相比都是不一样的。然而，对于这种鲜明对比的正当性，仍然没有达成共识。面对这个千年老题，烤鸭需冷静对”greater contribution to the society”进行具体对比论证。其次，需讨论其长远社会意义。

stipend 薪资 n.

practitioners 医学界从业人员 n.

be on par with 与某物同等水平

first-league celebrities 一线名人

no consensus over 尚未达成共识

Body 1

Those advocating a higher pay for well-qualified workers argue that a competitive earning bears testimony to criticality of certain professions to a society, whose sustainable development is anchored in public health, education of next generation as well as public utilities. Catering for tangible living needs of general public, the above-mentioned sectors seem to cast a long shadow on euphoria elicited from pop culture or athletic performance that surpass all previous records. Further, it is worried that a low pay could throw cold water on pliable minds who are eager to embark on professional career paths where prolonged years of intense academic study is a prerequisite. There could be a disheartening sequel to a sapped enthusiasm; a shortage of labor pool in teaching, nursing, medical treatment or civil engineering could turn up.

解析

那些主张提高高素质工人工资的人认为，有竞争力的收入证明了某些职业对社会的重要性，而社会的可持续发展取决于公共卫生、下一代教育以及公用事业。迎合大众有形生活需求的上述领域，似乎给超越历史纪录的流行文化或运动成绩带来的欣快感投下了长长的阴影。此外，人们还担心，低工资可能会给那些渴望走上专业职业道路的人泼上冷水，而长期的高强度学术学习是先决条件。热情消退后可能会出现令人沮丧的结局;教学、护理、医疗或土木工程方面的劳动力短缺可能会出现。

well-qualified workers 技术员工

bears testimony to 证明某事的存在/ testimony （法庭上的）证词

criticality 紧急程度 n.

be anchored in 扎根于 anchor v./n. 锚

public utilities 公共设施，如供电供水公共交通等

cast a long shadow on 使某事变得暗淡/胜过 cast v.投掷

euphoria elicited from 短暂的欣喜euphoria n./ elicit 得到

throw cold water on 泼冷水/打击某人的积极性

pliable minds 青少年 pliable易于改变的 adj.

embark on professional career paths 从事专业性的职业

prerequisite 前提 n.

sequel 续集 n.表示后果

a shortage of labor pool 劳动力短缺 labor pool 劳动力

turn up 出现

Body 2

However, it is absurd to devalue entertainment and sports worker whose performance is tailored to popular tastes, whether be rejoicing for creative arts or gusto for witnessing adrenalin-packed Super Bowl games. This excitement, being a getaway from one’s humdrum existence, could be scantly blanked out in societies which are already economically successful. Also, neglecting rarity of sports and showbiz professionals, standouts among a tiny fragment of population, is akin to renouncing their dwindling physical capacity and thus a relatively shorter career. That being said, a hefty pay is a vindication of complexity of their talent.

解析

但是，无论是为创造艺术而高兴，还是为观看令人兴奋的超级碗比赛而兴奋，贬低符合大众口味的娱乐、体育工作者，都是荒谬的。这种兴奋，作为一个人逃离单调生活的一种方式，在经济上已经成功的社会中是很难被忽视的。此外，忽视体育和娱乐圈专业人士的稀缺性，在一小部分人口中脱颖而出，就相当于放弃他们日益减少的身体能力，从而放弃相对较短的职业生涯。话虽如此，丰厚的薪酬证明了他们才华的复杂性。

absurd 荒谬的 adj.

devalue 贬低 v.

tailored to 为某事量身定做 tailor 裁缝 n.

rejoicing 欢庆 n.

gusto 兴致 n.

adrenalin-packed Super Bowl games 肾上腺素爆满的超级碗比赛 adrenalin 肾上腺素 n.

getaway 逃离 n.

humdrum existence 单调生活 humdrum 乏味的 adj.

scantly 仅仅 adv.

blanked out 划掉/排除

rarity 稀有度 n.

is akin to 类似于

renounce 拒绝/摒弃 v.

dwindling physical capacity 日渐衰落的身体素质

That being said 所以/ 换句话说

a hefty pay 高工资 hefty 大量的

vindication of 证明 n.

Ending paragraph

In conclusion, salary in this age is mainly determined by an occupation’s criticality, rarity, and complexity, and so-called unfair division of payroll is a gross exaggeration, when it comes to well-qualified labor and icons in sports and entertainment.

解析

总之，这个时代的工资主要取决于职业的重要性、稀缺性和复杂性，而所谓的不公平的工资分配是一种夸张的说法，当涉及到高素质的劳动力和体育和娱乐领域的偶像时。

is mainly determined by 主要被某物所决定

unfair division of payroll 工资的不公平分配 payroll 工资 n.

a gross exaggeration 夸大其词