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留学生落地感受 雅思男女教育话题6-7分作文对比

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出国留学心得体会篇

留学生 雅思话题作文

 
  在国外生活两年有余,回望留学路,虽然艰辛但我并没有后悔!

  记得当年申请学校也没有什么中介可以咨询,完全凭自己一手之力,找资料、递材料……飞赴加拿大的时候,还好有一个同伴,是父母好友的女儿,两个人去同一所学校。说起学校来,当时我还是有些心理波动,虽然是去国外读书,刚开始读的却是一所非常普通的学校,在人们眼里就相当于美国的社区大学。她心想自己怎么着也好歹是个重点高中的尖子生,考个重本没啥问题,甚至有希望去清华北大之类的名校。而且当时人们的收入没有现在这么高,家里虽然条件不错,但还是一笔蛮大的支出。这样的决定多少有些不成功便成仁的感觉。现在回忆起来觉得自己并没有后悔当初的决定。

  落地才知要租房

留学生 雅思话题作文
 

  在申请学校的过程中,发生了一个小插曲,当时我的签证实际上已经下来了,但是负责的签证官休假了还没有寄出,而到四月份我就必须要出去了,弄得我很着急。还好,我赶得巧,在出发前拿到了签证。因为当时申请加拿大留学虽然比美国容易,但是拒签率仍然接近一半。

  回忆当初的懵懂无知,我并不觉得害怕,反而有些新奇。当我们两个人下了飞机,负责接我们的华人朋友问她要住什么地方的时候,我们两个都傻眼了。原来她们以为申请好了学校,来到学校就会有人给安排宿舍,殊不知在加拿大都是自己租房子。不过事情比想象中的简单,我很快找到了一家华人家庭并住了两个月,后来搬到学校附近跟人合租房子。

留学生 雅思话题作文
 
  现在回忆起来,我觉得不怕的原因是,在那边其实什么事情都挺简单的,只要你肯问,总有人告诉你该怎么做,一套办事的程序就在那里。这是加拿大给我印象里的好处之一。学校的名字叫做Seneca College,现在已经是加拿大最大的社区学院,而我所读的专业是会计。我们四月份到了加拿大,等到九月份才正式开学,我们便多学习了一些语言课程。

  在加拿大没有受过歧视

留学生 雅思话题作文
 

  来到加国,在生活方面我适应得还算比较快,租房、买菜做饭等等,没有难倒这个从小就独立自主的小姑娘,而且有一个好朋友形影不离。刚到加拿大的时候,什么东西都感觉一个贵字,比如坐公交车虽然一块多加币,但换算成人民币也要十来块,在国内是打的的价钱。而且,那个时候国内往加拿大打个电话一分钟就要20多元,感觉很奢侈,通常一周才打一次电话。

  那时大陆的留学生不像现在这么多,所以也很少聚成一个小圈子,与当地人和其他国家来的学生交朋友便成了很自然的事情。在加拿大,不像在一些欧洲国家,当地人会有一种明显的优越感。加拿大是一个移民的国度,来自各个国家的人都有,所以文化上比较多元,大家会互相聊不同的国家不同的生活方式,没有人因为你来自哪里而歧视你。反倒是当时的港台生面对大陆来的学生会有少少的优越感。那个时候香港刚刚回归不久,大陆的经济也没有像现在一样崛起,许多香港人对前途都感觉比较迷茫,所以留学生之间的看法也会有少少的不自然,不管怎样,在加国的生活已经开始了———读书、工作、结婚、生子———都与这个国家密不可分了。

留学生 雅思话题作文
 
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In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subject, while boyschoose science subjects. What are the reasons? Do you think this trend shouldbe changed?
 
 
In contemeporary settings, there is acommon phenomenon seen in the schools and universities,the courses which are chose chosenby boys and girls show display  distinctive differencessignificantly,presented science and artrespectively.In this essay,I will explore the reason and give my ownopinion about it.
 
 
It is undeniable that various causes shouldtake the responsibility for this issue. To begin with, the traditionalstereotypes is one of the most powerful causes to lead tothe phenomenon. specifically,in most people’s impressions,boystend to show natural domain dominant strength  inthe ability of analyzing understanding comprehending and logical thinking than thecounterparts who have opposite sex ,which suitableall these characters put them in an advantaged positionfor science learning. Compared with boys,mathematicsbe seen as girls’s weakness.they girls are persuaded to work with aesthetics, music and painting,which is all things about art courses. In addition, the gender’s differencewill lead to dissimilar character traits ,which means men and women payattention for different aspects.For example,toys that from opposite sex totallyhave disparate characters.cars and other mechanical tools always boys’spriority,girls put more interesting in dolls and role play.Therefore,differentcharacters leads to choose the differences in selections ofcourses in the schools.
 
This trend definitely will change in thedays to come. Thanks to the advanced open-mindatmosphere due to the development oftechnology and shift in values ,students nomatter the gender have right to choose their curriculums by based on theirown interests rather than genders. As a result, theywill receive all-rounded development when more knowledge is provided for them,which add an advantage for their careerpath.Apart from it,students is not the only beneficiary from this change,thesociety also get benefits.For example,when malescientists not limited in men account for the largest proportion, the talented womenwill add more cautious and innovative ideas inthe scientific experiments, which will promote the whole development of societyto some extent.
 
In conclusion,the curriculums’s choice cannot be limited by gender,instead,it is advise advisable for schools to encourage students all-rounddevelopment under based on their interests rather than gender prejudice.
 
Task  response 7
Coherence 6
Grammar 6
Vocabulary 7
Overall 6-6.5
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In schools and universities, girls tend to choosearts subject, while boys choose science subjects. What are the reasons? Do youthink this trend should be changed?
 
It is well known that malesgenerally choose science subjects in schools and universities, while females arelikely to choose arts subjects as their major. It is necessary to explore thereasons behind this phenomenon and analyze the pros and cons of this trend.
 
Traditional stereotype aboutmen and women is the main cause of this phenomenon. It is widely believed thatmen are more suitable for scientific research because they are born withrational thinking and exploration skills. If they choose to enter the artsfiled, they will be questioned by their friends and families. On the contrary,girls are considered to have the talent of arts, such as literature andlanguage, so they should choose the art field to do what they are good at. Whatis more, women are less accepted in the field of science, while men’sperformance in the field of art is also viewed with suspicion.
 
I think it is good toencourage students to try unfamiliar subjects. Men can integrate theirexploration skills into the creation of arts, and women can also perform theircreativity in the field of science. Meanwhile, male andfemale students can also be encouraged to try different subjects. Tryingdifferent subjects may motivate their potential, because everyone has differenttalents. In addition, in such a diverse society, more comprehensive abilitiesare more conducive to the employment of young generation.
 
In conclusion, gender prejudice that causesthis phenomenon should be eliminated, and students should be encouraged to trysubjects that they are interested in or expert in.
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