为什么我的托福写作分数总是提不高？原因在这里

To begin with, by no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays. Due to the proliferation of hi-tech devices, such as smart phones with Internet connection, education is no longer restrained into traditional classroom. To be more specific, not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time, but also, thanks to the proGREssive technology of storing data, various kinds of information is available online. Therefore, students are bestowed with more opportunities of self-training in the long term. A salient example can be used here to illustrate my point of view. I used to hate doing research since searching for information always took me a long time. However, since several years ago, I began enjoying collecting resources online, such as E-books and others’ thesis, sometimes with my smart phone. To be honest, it is a way full of pleasure and convenience, which denotes that education is a lot easier today.

我们看到以上这段的时候，是不是觉得自己也能写的出来呢？但是你的拿到手跟以上相比，你少的就是：清晰、明了，也没有什么超难的词汇。我们发现其中还是有长难句的使用的，但是我们需要知道一点，长句子并不意味着就能拿到高分，但是长句的表达能力也是我们必备的写作条件，代表着自己的水平。我们打个比方，如果一段话是表达清晰流畅都是短句，或者又是表达清晰流畅其中夹杂着长句，且语法正确，那么肯定是带有长句的写作相比较而言分数高一点的。长难句的运用也是好的，但是难词就不要轻易触碰了，除非你有十足的把握。

上面的例文中，能够发现在以前初学英语的时候常见语法，否定词在句首，可以使用部分倒装，部分倒装的结构是 情态动词/助动词+主语+剩余动词 ，举例如下：

By no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays.

Never should we ignore the importance of mental health on children’s development.

此外，我们还可以看到not only在句首的倒装结构，Not only 倒装，but also 不倒装

Not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time, but also, thanks to the progressive technology of storing data, various kinds of information is available online.

Only 放在句首，也是一个常见的倒装句结。

Only by taking diverse jobs can we truly know our abilities and interests.

接下来，我再分享另外一个结构：悬垂结构，我更愿意称之为SVO, doing./Doing, SVO在这个结构中，我们要求句子只有一个主语S，一个主句SVO，而doing可以理解成是主语S的动作，或者是SVO这个句子引发的伴随状态，充当状语部分，例句如下：

Walking on the street, I met an old friend.

Most people are busy in their daily life, earning more money for their families.

Thinking of the fact that more people tend to study English, schools set up English groups.

Considering the fact that sharing ideas with net friends with various backgrounds can lead to numerous precious information, students can draw more precise conclusions and make wiser decisions while chatting online.

Being impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger.

同样，在最后这个句子中Being impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger. 是可以理解成主语China’s economy 和impressed是被动关系的，所以延伸出一个结构 SVO, done./Done, SVO.

Impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger.

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